The Story

posted March 23rd, 2015, 4:03 pm

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March 23rd, 2015, 4:09 pm

Lilylilymine

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THIS IS THE LAST PAGE!!
Thank you everyone for reading my comic! and leaving comments! It means SO MUCH that you all cared enough to check it out and I really hope you liked it!

This of course won't be the last comic by me, I plan on making LOTS MORE.

please consider following me on twitter and tumblr for more art and comics, including a brand new story I am making about mermaids! I also plan on doing a print run and selling copies of the comic if you would ever like a physical copy!


HTTPS://TWITTER.COM/JESSISHERON
or tumblr! at
HTTP://LILYLILYMINE.TUMBLR.COM/
Also if you ever want to reach me by email!
this is my email below!
jessisheron@gmail.com

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March 23rd, 2015, 4:38 pm

Furubatsu (Guest)

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It's over!?

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March 30th, 2015, 7:40 pm

Lilylilymine

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@Furubatsu: its over!! but I'll be making a lot more comics!

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March 23rd, 2015, 4:52 pm

RedClause

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really great story! Congrats on finishing!

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March 30th, 2015, 7:40 pm

Lilylilymine

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@RedClause: thank you so much! and thanks for giving it a chance and reading it!

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March 23rd, 2015, 6:22 pm

BurstThrough

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So she becomes a beautiful version of Baba Yaga?

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March 23rd, 2015, 7:36 pm

Freckley

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This was a really cool story!

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March 30th, 2015, 7:41 pm

Lilylilymine

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@Freckley: thank you Freckley! i'm so glad you liked it!

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March 23rd, 2015, 8:29 pm

Dana (Guest)

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I really enjoyed your comic! Can't wait to see more of your comics!

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March 30th, 2015, 7:41 pm

Lilylilymine

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@Dana: aaah thank you for reading it Dana! I can't wait to show you what else I got coming!

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March 24th, 2015, 3:37 pm

Steve (Guest)

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Found this today and read the whole story. Very well done! The story and art are both excellent! I look forward to your next story!

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March 30th, 2015, 7:42 pm

Lilylilymine

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@Steve: thank you so much for reading it Steve!! I worked hard on the art AND story so I'm so glad you liked both! I can't wait to show you what else i got cookin!

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March 24th, 2015, 8:14 pm

Glowworm (Guest)

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I've been following this comic ever since I first found it on DeviantArt.

I must say, I really really like it. It's rare to see someone flip the evil queen stereotype completely upside down--and you did it perfectly. At first I was worried that Laviana's apology to her stepdaughter would be insincere, as I've seen and read lots of fairy tales where the redemption is but a farce to commit more wicked deeds against the stepdaughter. However, I was pleasantly surprised to see how it turned out, and I love the idea of Laviana going out into the world helping those who deserve it, and dealing justice to those who are just asking for it. I look forward to seeing your next story.

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March 30th, 2015, 7:43 pm

Lilylilymine

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@Glowworm: wow!! thank you for the long insightful comment, I love that you really thought about my story, I'm really glad you liked the ending too, I was happy when I came up with it but I was a little worried about how it would come across to the audience, I'm glad you got it and liked it!

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March 24th, 2015, 9:06 pm

bubbles

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Really loved your comic
wish this one didnt end
but im excited to see more of your work
^_^

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March 30th, 2015, 7:44 pm

Lilylilymine

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@bubbles: Thank you so much Bubbles! I really hope you'll like what I'm working on next!

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March 24th, 2015, 10:11 pm

Giulia (Guest)

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I really loved this comic I'll def check out your other ones! I am sad this one is over.

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March 30th, 2015, 7:44 pm

Lilylilymine

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@Giulia: your comments always made me so happy every time I read them, I'm so glad you liked it! I can't wait to show you what else I'm making!

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March 28th, 2015, 6:44 pm

Fluffyturnip

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Oh my gosh, this entire story was so wonderful! I really enjoyed reading this, and thanks so much for posting! :)

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March 30th, 2015, 7:43 pm

Lilylilymine

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@Fluffyturnip: aaaah thank you so much for reading it! I'm so glad you liked it!!

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March 30th, 2015, 4:50 pm

DeathDragon (Guest)

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THANK YOU SO MUCH FOR MAKING THIS COMIC!! ITS BEEN AMAZING!!!

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March 30th, 2015, 7:38 pm

Lilylilymine

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@DeathDragon: Thank you so much for reading!!! and commenting and being AWESOME! i hope you'll check out what i make next!

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March 31st, 2015, 11:17 pm

Dark-Chibi-Shadow

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Thank you so much for creating and sharing this gorgeous comic! I absolutely adored it! <3

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April 7th, 2015, 7:14 pm

Lilylilymine

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@Dark-Chibi-Shadow: thank YOU so much for reading and always leaving such nice comments, it means so much! I can't wait to show you new things I will make!

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April 5th, 2015, 3:20 pm

Natalia (Guest)

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I've been following your comic for a couple of months and I really liked reading it! Waiting for new pages was really great and I like how the story turned out. You are a great storyteller and illustrator! I hope to read another comics of yours soon :)
Have a great day! xx

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April 7th, 2015, 7:14 pm

Lilylilymine

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@Natalia: thank you so much Natalia!!! this comment made me smile SO MUCH! I can't wait to show you new comics!

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April 6th, 2015, 11:30 pm

aks (Guest)

great work!!!

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I liked it very much! Couldn't stop clicking next!! good luck for next!!! :-)

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April 7th, 2015, 7:14 pm

Lilylilymine

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@aks: AAAH thank you Aks!!! I hope whatever I make next you will enjoy too!

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April 9th, 2015, 1:16 pm

Ai Yoku

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this story was excellent :)

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April 13th, 2015, 1:46 am

Maura (Guest)

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Fantastic! Wow, this comic is an absolute visual feast, I love the color schemes you work with, they are so vibrant, and the magic is nicely handled. The story is great too, I loved seeing the cycle broken, of women no longer being pitted against other women for the affections of chauvinists. Lovely stuff, I'll be following your other comics with interest!

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April 17th, 2015, 11:30 am

LeoVincent

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I just loved it! Will there be any sequel? Hope to see more of your works :)

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April 24th, 2015, 10:56 am

Yumimarie

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OMG This comic! I started reading it because I was curious but... I couldn't stop until the end. I loved it. I like the twist that the queen wasn't evil in the end. I like how she didn't harm the princess. Beautifully drawn and well written.

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May 11th, 2015, 10:28 am

Deviciouss

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This was great, both the story and art. (But especially the art: oh, some pages were incredible.)
Although I wouldn't mind seeing a short story or two that follow Laviana's adventures (or Rosalie's) after she left the castle. In a way it seems like the true story has just begun. :)

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May 14th, 2015, 3:11 pm

P.D.S. (Guest)

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I hope this isnt taken the wrong way but honestly I cant bring myself to say I liked anything about this comic outside of the art. Im sorry but the whole time I felt like I was reading a weaker version of the already pretty bad Maleficent film of 2014.

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June 29th, 2015, 3:09 pm

AradHunter

WoW

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Such a beautiful story! I loved it from beginning to end!

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July 5th, 2015, 3:06 am

Appelslak

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This was such an incredible read! I really enjoyed it.

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July 6th, 2015, 11:30 am

Karaii

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What an enjoyable story! I really like how you snuck in bits of Cinderella and other "good witch" stories amidst the "bad witch" stories, all together to make this lovely version. Your characters were all heartfelt and interesting to see develop. But above all, I love the COLOURS. What a great comic!!

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July 8th, 2015, 2:54 am

Kynn

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wow congrats i start reading your story , and i totally love it .
what a good plot and great art

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July 27th, 2015, 12:50 am

Malex (Guest)

The Evil Queen

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@Lilylilymine: Your story, The Evil Queen is phenomenal. At first, i thought it was just some copied tale, but this stands out on its own.

The plot was amazing, the ending was so surprising, and the art work is stunning.

I am glad i took the time to read it. I simply couldn't stop reading after the first page. THANK YOU FOR YOUR HARD WORK! I appreciate the effort you did to share your story.

Yours truly, Malex, coolkid. :D

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September 19th, 2015, 2:50 pm

cinnamonsnaps

SCREAMING

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i didn't realise how perfect this comic would be!!!

1) feminist interpretation of the "evil stepmother slash madonna/whore complex slash youth = beauty" trope
2) excellent colour schemes and good art and just.... the fancy flame effects and DAMN OKAY
3) compelling story telling

im going into conniptions this is too much

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September 25th, 2015, 3:22 pm

the book geek

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This is soooo much better then the real version

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October 10th, 2015, 10:41 am

Blue Lettice

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Wow. this is amazing, love all the colours and wasn't expecting the plot to go that way, really awesome :)

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October 30th, 2015, 6:26 pm

Stig Hemmer

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*stands up* Applause! Applause! *gives standing ovation*

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January 10th, 2016, 5:16 am

TheKillerPrince99

The Good Book

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I liked it so much and I'm hungry I want to see more of them!

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February 5th, 2016, 6:08 pm

smolsin

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this was so beautifully drawn and the story was amazing! I can't wait to read more of your comics.

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April 27th, 2016, 5:20 pm

MrFester

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THIS WAS SO AWESOME. I loved it, so so much!! THAT WAS SO GOOD.

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August 14th, 2016, 10:36 am

Zeta (Guest)

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I forgot about this comic in my bookmarks for a long time (like, a /long/ time) but I'm happy to see it finished and on such a sweet note too! I really enjoy the way you've used minimal colouring on some pages to draw attention to the focus of the panels it's v cool

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September 6th, 2016, 5:51 pm

Dim Lights Haven

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A lovely story indeed. I hope to read many more beautiful stories.

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